This isn't reflective of me, really; except I'm a little blue, I have a lot of friends who are breaking up, and I heard a whale song today. It's the most mournful sound I can imagine. It really pricked my heart, so I wrote this:
Sea-Sighed Villanelle
I heard a whale song's mournful tone
The day the stars fell from the sky.
I sat me down, the ocean moaned.
You would not stay, I could not go!
I grasped you till my tears ran dry,
I sang the whale song's mournful tone
but none sang back. And soon, alone,
I finally had to say goodbye.
I sat me down, began to moan.
The mist, the ocean, and its foam
swallowed hope when you left -- I
became a whale song's mournful tone.
I wandered high, I drifted low,
in nothingness bled painful sighs.
I sat me down, began to moan.
I went when night winds start to blow,
I waded out to shoulder-height
I heard a whale song's mournful tone,
I sat me down. The ocean moaned.
Phew.or, Julie's first print review
2 days ago
2 comments:
Beautiful!! Thank you for sharing that.
That was beautiful.
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